Titles

By changing how my titles are placed in my opening helped to improve my continuity especially where Amelia leaves her room and walks down the landing, as by putting the titles in between my shots on black backgrounds allows me to cut out some of the continuity errors which were present in my first rough cut (e.g. the continuity error between the bedroom and the landing has been improved as she is seen closing the door after this a black screen with titles on it then we are brought back to Amelia just after she has finished closing the door.)
The only title which has not been changed is the 'Origin of the Soul' title as I think that this works well and is effective being on the dead persons face.